WALT learn and write about persuasive texts
This term and a bit of last term, for writing we have been focusing on Persuasive writing. We had to write about what we think is better clothing to wear to school: mufti or uniform. I chose mufti because I think it is more fun to wear mufti to school. I had to come up with heaps of ideas why I think Mufti is better, write them down, type it up and now, put it on my blog. I spent quite a lot of time on it and I hope you can agree with me that mufti is better than uniform.
Mufti BETTER!
Introduction
If we had a vote between what is better clothing to wear to school: uniform or mufti, I could guarantee that more people would choose mufti. What would you prefer? Today I will be telling you why I think mufti is better than a boring, uncomfortable, unnecessary uniform.
Paragraph 1: Better variety of clothes to wear
If we are allowed to wear mufti to school, we can wear something different everyday! You will also get a chance to wear some of your clothes that you haven’t worn before. There is a better variety of clothes to wear to school if you wear mufti. The school uniform is pretty much just the same thing every single day! The school will look more bright and colourful if we can wear mufti to school, because not everybody will be wearing blue.
Paragraph 2: Comfortable clothes
It will be more comfortable if we can wear mufti to school. Say if you are doing training for Athletics or Cross Country, and you don’t know you are, if you’re wearing mufti, you will be wearing more comfortable and appropriate footwear for the different activities.
Paragraph 3: Easier to recognise
It will be easier for the teachers to recognise people because teachers usually get kids mixed up for a different kid, but if we wear mufti, since everybody will probably be wearing different clothes, so the chances of the teachers getting kids mixed up is low. Some other reasons why wearing mufti to school is better is because, more kids will be happy that we get to wear mufti to school, there is no cost to buy a uniform, because you already have clothes at home, and the teachers get to wear mufti, so why can’t we?
Conclusion
In conclusion, it is so obvious that wearing mufti to school is WAAAAY better than a uniform because it is more comfy, colourful and you don’t have to pay for silly uniforms. If you are on Team Uniform, I hope I have changed your mind. Because MUFTI IS BETTER!